This is the cover I did for my little red riding hood comic in sequential art. I really enjoyed inking in that class so I tried to ink the cover over the winter break.
I think Red's hood would look better if it had a plaid pattern but I have not figured out how to do that with ink yet so I left it out. I also had some difficulty inking the tail so, I took that out too. I was looking to much like a flame when I tried to ink it. ={
Any comments or suggestions would be much appretiated.
Thanks
Hey Crystal. There looks like there is a tangent on Red's left side (our right) near her arm and hood. Also the contour of the wolf's body that is directly above Red seems to match the contour of her shape a little bit to much to where it seems like they blend together, maybe change the form of his contour? Like straighten it or vary the bumps a bit. Hope that helps :x
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